Sunday, January 21, 2018

Memo #1 Writing from a different point of view

 
Classroom Setup

Upon entering room 14, I am greeted at the door by my English teacher. She stands at the door during passing time and exchanges a greeting to each student. “Good afternoon Hailey! Welcome to class.” Once inside the room, it is apparent that our classroom is spacious and colorful. The walls are decorated with bright banners and posters that relate to the English language. Our work is displayed on several bulletin boards. I see my flyer hanging in the back, which I created to help save “Old Ironsides,” a heroic warship from the War of 1812 that faced demolition for scrap metal. It’s a nice reminder that my work has a purpose.

The desks are set up in rows with a center path in the room. The teacher’s desk is in the right corner at the front of the room facing our desks. The room configuration reinforces the notion that the teacher holds the power in the classroom. The room set up is “traditional” and it allows the teacher to move around the room easily. The teacher can easily stand in the back of the classroom and get a clear view of our laptops. When the teacher circulates the room, we stay on task because of the powerful presence of the teacher. We are aware that our screens are in view, so we are sure to stay on task, at least until the she (our teacher) returns to her desk. If it was up to me, I think I would prefer sitting in groups. This would allow me to face my classmates, since half the room is hidden by the large beam in the center of the room. Also, the configuration of the room could improve by spacing out the desks so that we have more space during learning. Currently, the desks in each row are touching each other, which is uncomfortable for the classmate who must sit in the middle.

 
Overall, I do feel a bond with my teacher. I like that she tries to speak to me at least once a day. Also, the classroom itself is warm and welcoming, but I notice that it lacks photos of positive role models. The classroom décor could improve by including images of positive role models for all of us students to relate to (writers of color, women, gay / lesbian, etc.) Since I am a woman of color, it would be nice to have an inspirational writer displayed in the room, such as Zora Neale Hurston or Maya Angelou. In other words, the classroom should function as “windows and mirrors” so that all students feel represented and welcomed. 


Curriculum

In our sophomore English classroom, our teacher explores a variety of genres, including short stories, poems, dramas, and novels. From my experience this far within this classroom, it is clear that the majority of the authors are Caucasian. I find this strange since SRA is a diverse school. It would make sense to have some White authors to fit the population, but the class does not read texts from any Hispanic authors even though they make up a good portion of the student body. Within the curriculum, there is only one Asian writer taught. There are a few African American authors, such as Langston Hughes, Maya Angelou, and Mark Mathabane. A constructive criticism for this classroom is to have more female authors and authors of color so that all of us students have a chance to see ourselves more in the curriculum, regardless of our race and/ or gender.

 

Praxis

In this English classroom, we commonly journal at the start of the period. These journals often relate to current events or they are based on our opinions on a given subject. These journals give us a chance to feel invested in the curriculum. Giving us a chance to express our personal views and experiences helps us establish “windows and mirrors” in the classroom. These journals also allow us to share our responses with a neighbor and/ or with the class. These sharing activities help to establish community in the classroom. This is how I have met two of my new friends this year.

Our teacher often tries to give us opportunities for collaboration. She could improve her teaching by implementing more cooperative learning grouping and less “group work.” There have been assignments that have enabled some students to relax while one or two students within the group completed the bulk of the work. This happened to me during our last group assignment. Me and my friend did all the work while two other group members just sat back and goofed off. Designing more lessons that hold us all accountable will ensure a positive experience for all of us without anyone feeling obligated to do the work for another classmate.

Throughout the year, the teacher often assigns reading for homework. With the exception of the poetry unit, we are usually expected to complete reading homework 2-4 nights weekly. This assigned reading is based on the book that we are reading together as a class.  The teacher selects this book. When we have complete the assigned reading, we must answer 10 questions per chapter that accompany the reading. Most of these questions are “knowledge based” (Bloom’s Taxonomy) or in other words, questions with obvious answers. Many of my classmates have been penalized by the administration for copying their friend’s work. This homework format is meant to hold us accountable for the reading, but it has resulted in many students simply using their friends to find the answers.

 

Going forward, another form of reading assessment could be more thought-provoking while holding us accountable for the reading. Answering questions can be really boring and just feel like busy work. Perhaps “diary entries” from the point of view of a character could ensure originality while allowing us to critically consider another character’s perspective. Another suggestion would be for us to utilize our technology by setting up blogs. We could post our entries on a blogger account and then our classmates could read and comment. This would also help us model writing for one another. Additionally, encouraging independent reading or even book groups could help give us a choice in what they read, instead of just focusing on one novel in the classroom.

 

Final Thoughts

Overall, the classroom climate could improve if the teacher can incorporate additional opportunities for voice and choice in the classroom. The classroom space can also be configured to ensure that we feel comfortable and empowered.  

  

 
 
 
 

 
 
 
 
 

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